My path has moved far away from the one that you had traveled//
Will my flowers ever find fulfillment in your garland,
The sounds of your flute float across the distant winds, weeping for whom I know not//
I rest my weary body in the shade of a road side tree/
Where is the one with whom I may share this painful loneliness-
Other travellers have all gone on ahead, leaving me behind //
Very good… only a suggestion… will you like to consider the use of the word ‘far’. Don’t you think that ‘far away’ will be better?
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